Feedback orchestration: Structuring feedback for facilitating reflection and revision in writing

Yi Ching Huang; Jane Yung-jen Hsu; Hao Chuan Wang

doi:10.1145/3272973.3274069

Feedback orchestration: Structuring feedback for facilitating reflection and revision in writing

Yi Ching Huang, Jane Yung-jen Hsu, Hao Chuan Wang

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Abstract

Writing, as a complex creative task, demands rich feedback in the writing revision process. While much effort has focused on improving diversity and quality of feedback, little research explored how feedback can be effectively integrated into revisions. This work introduces Feedback Orchestration that guides novices to revise and reflect on their creative work by structuring feedback in the revision process. Three design guidelines, including a rhetorical structure, meta-feedback, and a flexible revision workflow, are used for supporting novices to filter information, identify weaknesses, and facilitate revision. The presented framework will close the gap between feedback provided and the subsequent performance by structuring revision processes.

Original language	English
Title of host publication	CSCW 2018 Companion - Companion of the 2018 ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work and Social Computing
Publisher	Association for Computing Machinery
Pages	257-260
Number of pages	4
ISBN (Electronic)	9781450360180
DOIs	https://doi.org/10.1145/3272973.3274069
State	Published - 30 10 2018
Externally published	Yes
Event	21st ACM Conference on Computer-Supported Cooperative Work and Social Computing, CSCW 2018 - Jersey City, United States Duration: 03 11 2018 → 07 11 2018

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Name	Proceedings of the ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work, CSCW

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Conference	21st ACM Conference on Computer-Supported Cooperative Work and Social Computing, CSCW 2018
Country/Territory	United States
City	Jersey City
Period	03/11/18 → 07/11/18

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Keywords

Feedback-driven revision
Online feedback exchange
Scaffolding
Writing feedback

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Huang, Y. C., Yung-jen Hsu, J., & Wang, H. C. (2018). Feedback orchestration: Structuring feedback for facilitating reflection and revision in writing. In CSCW 2018 Companion - Companion of the 2018 ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work and Social Computing (pp. 257-260). (Proceedings of the ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work, CSCW). Association for Computing Machinery. https://doi.org/10.1145/3272973.3274069

Huang, Yi Ching ; Yung-jen Hsu, Jane ; Wang, Hao Chuan. / Feedback orchestration : Structuring feedback for facilitating reflection and revision in writing. CSCW 2018 Companion - Companion of the 2018 ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work and Social Computing. Association for Computing Machinery, 2018. pp. 257-260 (Proceedings of the ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work, CSCW).

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Huang, YC, Yung-jen Hsu, J & Wang, HC 2018, Feedback orchestration: Structuring feedback for facilitating reflection and revision in writing. in CSCW 2018 Companion - Companion of the 2018 ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work and Social Computing. Proceedings of the ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work, CSCW, Association for Computing Machinery, pp. 257-260, 21st ACM Conference on Computer-Supported Cooperative Work and Social Computing, CSCW 2018, Jersey City, United States, 03/11/18. https://doi.org/10.1145/3272973.3274069

Feedback orchestration: Structuring feedback for facilitating reflection and revision in writing. / Huang, Yi Ching; Yung-jen Hsu, Jane; Wang, Hao Chuan.
CSCW 2018 Companion - Companion of the 2018 ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work and Social Computing. Association for Computing Machinery, 2018. p. 257-260 (Proceedings of the ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work, CSCW).

Research output: Chapter in Book/Report/Conference proceeding › Conference contribution › peer-review

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Huang YC, Yung-jen Hsu J, Wang HC. Feedback orchestration: Structuring feedback for facilitating reflection and revision in writing. In CSCW 2018 Companion - Companion of the 2018 ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work and Social Computing. Association for Computing Machinery. 2018. p. 257-260. (Proceedings of the ACM Conference on Computer Supported Cooperative Work, CSCW). doi: 10.1145/3272973.3274069

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